The Dark One!

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56 Responses

  1. vampires 🙂 poem describes everything about vampires 🙂 good one swatz 🙂

  2. Leo says:

    A vamp poem? 🙂 Now that's different. Love the rhyme.

  3. nibhz says:

    ooohhh!! a poem on vampires! ofcourse i loved it! 🙂

  4. Such a comprehensive poem on vampires. Really liked it.

  5. That's was a good take on "thirst". Loved your description 🙂

  6. Wow!! Brilliant! I'm reading a poem on vampires for the first time and it has blown my mind away 🙂
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  7. Laurie Kolp says:

    Scary and wonderful!

  8. Brian Miller says:

    ha. def a unique take on the prompt….but the vampire does know the thirst….part of his curse….i imagine quite intoxicating as well…

  9. Ankur Anand says:

    i dont like vamp !.. nice poem though 🙂

  10. Gabriella says:

    This is quite an original take on the prompt. Very craftily penned!

  11. Mary says:

    This gives me the chills…which means it is definitely an effective poem.

  12. Pixie says:

    Brrr! That sent shivers down my spine!!
    And I read it just before going to sleep! Vampires give me the creeps and this poem did too!

  13. SG says:

    Vampire? That's cool.

  14. Red Handed says:

    hehe he does glyde away in style. Sexy vampires 😛

  15. Rupasi says:

    Damn!!! I never really likes vampires :-/

  16. umangawasthi says:

    Oh wow! Something different! True for all what you have said about vampires. I love watching Vampire Diaries BTW. I think you also should if you don't. That would give you some more ideas to write on them :p

  17. Ankita says:

    i had never read a poem about vampires and this one is so interesting and lovely!!!

  18. Gail says:

    Vampires have never sounded so romantic. Well done.

  19. Reading a poem on vampires for the first time. Love it! 🙂

  20. Hello! Interesting, I drafted a few lines on Zombie last morning and now I read one on Vampire 🙂 Nicely written 🙂

  21. Sumana Roy says:

    ouch…poor lass…a lovely 🙂

  22. Suzy says:

    Oh my too gory and scary. But nicely written.

  23. .scary one but you have created a nice suspense too.very nice:)

  24. Shailaja V says:

    I was right. Description is your forte! Well crafted, Swathi!

  25. mrs-minerva says:

    Wooha! Simply awesome! Vampires are always a great source of inspiration, aren't they? If you like the topic, you will surely know Baudelaire's poem: "The Vampire". I love this take on the prompt you have made!

    • swathishenoy says:

      Thanks a lot Minerva 🙂 No I haven't read that poem, I have only read stories of vampires so far. But now will check the poem 🙂 Thanks again 🙂

  26. Vampires! An interesting read, thank you for that.

  27. Surfed on here from poetry jam, will come back to comment further when it is not 1 in the morning where I am. Brrr.

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