Wishes – Five Sentence Fiction #9

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61 Responses

  1. Shailaja V says:

    Awww, how adorable 🙂 Trust a child to come up with something like that!

  2. How innocent is the kid and the pic prompt and the little story go hand-in-hand.

  3. Nabanita says:

    Oh so sweet this is…innocence in the write up really

  4. Soumya says:

    Ah that innocence. Wish we could be children forever!

  5. SG says:

    That is cool.

  6. A says:

    So much innocence in this one!

  7. Ranu 802 says:

    It is such a sweet wish.

  8. That was an unexpected but a natural wish of a small child.Nice story

  9. Kajal Kapur says:

    How cute is that? 🙂 lovely story 🙂

  10. Ankur Anand says:

    a story filled with so much innocence ! 🙂 lovely

  11. nibhz says:

    That's so cute and innocent!! just loved it!

  12. Eli Z says:

    Aaawwww that was so cute:-) Kids…:-) adorable pic:-)

  13. aww!! the innocence of child always brings smile on others face! well written 🙂 !

  14. Aditi says:

    That was so cute!! 🙂 🙂

  15. Aww.. so sweet 🙂 🙂 Lovely post!

  16. Shilpa Garg says:

    Aah! Such an endearing innocence!! 🙂

  17. umangawasthi says:

    Nice Swathi! Nothing could beat a child's innocence! 🙂

  18. Red Handed says:

    hehehehehe..innocence personified.

  19. Shilpa Gupte says:

    Aww, that was such a sweet little story….Swathi! The innocence of the little girl is so well portrayed!

  20. Wow, you've painted a beautiful emotion here. Lovely!

  21. Ankita says:

    too cute! kids and their innocent wishes!

  22. love this <3 d pic n d words are so much in sync <3

  23. Bikram says:

    the innocence of kids .. why did we adults loose all that .. I wish we all got it back


  24. Sushree Dash says:

    it's damn cute 🙂

  25. Sooo cute 🙂 Schools are so dreadful at that age na?

  26. Ahh so sweet , this is 🙂 I'm sure the mom listened to her 😀

  27. Amrit Sinha says:

    This is so cute and innocent … loved it 🙂

  28. Anita says:

    Such an innocent wish, Swathi 🙂

  29. Cute and Innocence. You actually said that makes it even more cute now 😀 I just love kids (well, as long as they don't start using their evil brain starting all the pranks like I did 😉 )

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