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  1. Neha Anjum says:

    this makes me say WOW 🙂 <3 can feel those lines …. 🙂 way to go swati ….. 🙂

  2. good one… dont be sad .. keep smiling.. 🙂

  3. Shyam Sundar says:

    "By letting go of her wounded self." The last line and Stumbling me heavily.. !!! So powerful line.. 🙂 and Yes i Bookmarked your Site now 😛

  4. Priya says:

    Your poem perfectly describes the struggle it is to move on. I only hope 'she' realizes that she doesn't need someone else to come by and 'redeem her heart.' She can do it herself. 🙂

  5. Ananya N says:

    beautifully written 🙂

  6. yasmeen says:

    A great blend of words and the meaning of this , is something close to my life thats extracted. Lovely written !!

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