Crux

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  1. Sushree Dash says:

    I love the way the story is moving….

  2. Shilpa Garg says:

    Oh! What is she hiding from Ayaan and what's the hurry to leave. Waiting for the next part, now!

  3. Simran says:

    Oh my! another suspense and now its getting serious :O
    What is she hiding from Ayaan and why she has to sacrifice her love…waiting eagerly for more surprises 😀

  4. nibhz says:

    What!! She is leaving but why?? Please don't let her!Caged

  5. Usha Menon says:

    Your storywriting is perfecgt, The interest of the reader is maintained . Looking forward for the next portion.

  6. Now that I know her decision, I am curious about the reason behind it. You are doing a fab job, Swathi 🙂
    *Shantala @ ShanayaTales*

  7. Fascinating, I love where this is going!

  8. Namrata says:

    I loved the theme..I wanted to do something similar but I couldn't make up for several letters. I love it now. So excited to see what's next. 🙂
    http://bluesomeheart.blogspot.in/?m=1

  9. Loved it Swathi! I am more and more hooked to this story and I really want to know what's cooking 🙂

  10. Ls says:

    The story is getting interesting.. coming back for more

  11. Prasanna Rao says:

    The plot gets interesting. I wonder what Kayra is actually hiding from Ayaan. Maybe she is suffering from terminal disease (Ok, I need to seriously reduce my Bollywood drama). Keep it coming Swathi 🙂

  12. The plot thickens ! Excellent narration. Can't wait to read more 🙂

  13. The plot is moving ahead at a furious pace. Can't wait to find out what Kayra wants to hide from Ayan 😀

  14. Malavikka says:

    This is the first time im dropping into your blog and I think is episode is lively. Waiting to see what unfolds. All the best!

    Do drop into http://www.malavikka.blogspot.com

  15. I like the pace…it's neither too fast nor too slow, It kind of lets you see into the protagonists' character and want to help them…just the way a story should be. kudos!

  16. Suzy says:

    This is getting better and better everyday. Wonder why she is leaving …

  17. sulekkha says:

    I enjoy your take on the book's titles and the ongoing story too. Happy to be here 🙂

  18. Aathira says:

    You should seriously consider turning this into a book, Swathi. I'm liking Kayra more and more 🙂 Keep it coming.

  19. Gripping! Its not fair to leave us like this again!! Tell us more 🙂 Well done.

  20. Vidya Sury says:

    It is great! I do hope you'll turn this into a book, Swathi. I love your theme.

  21. Awesome idea for a theme! And I too want to know the truth.

  22. This is getting better each day…can't wait to read the next instalment. I feel like I'm watching a TV series and it ends at just the right time but it drives me nuts that I have to wait! 😛

  23. mamawee says:

    what a great theme! I have to go back and read the previous posts now!

  24. Loved this Swathi Waiting to read more.

  25. Arpita Dash says:

    Eagerly waiting for the next part, I'm smelling more twists and turns in this story.

  26. Thrill you have created amongst your readers..!! Waiting for the next chapter

    Cheers

  27. Your A to Z challenge is actually a two-in-one … As much as the story is gripping .. these little titbits with novels with the same title is good to know information. Keep it going ….

  28. Vinay Leo R. says:

    I didn't get the theme immediately but now I followed 🙂 story moving along fine. waiting for chapter D.

  29. Swathu! Aha a novella. Love the way u interpreted a story. It's not just about love but what each other seek in life and many of us forget that we have a life. It matters more than anything. Love the last line. A brilliant chapter:)

  30. Great theme! I love your word today too: Crux: such an under-utilized word! Wonderful story. I'll look forward to reading the next chapter.
    Happy A-Zing
    Michele at Angels Bark

  31. Love this theme Swathi… getting reader on the edge. well done

  32. Shine Kapoor says:

    Wonderfully penned. I simply loved the narration. Keep it up!

    Do drop by my blog – http://blog.shinekapoor.com/

  33. I couldn't read this yesterday, so hoping over to the next part now. 🙂 can't wait, Swathi. You are good. 🙂

  34. Eli Ert says:

    Hmmm, I m getting curious now.. Why she is leaving .. Love how she stands up for herself and hope she follows her dream and passion and leaving for some good reason . I am tuned

  35. Rajlakshmi says:

    I am wondering about what Kayra is going through … off to read the next part

  36. Debbie D. says:

    Obviously there's a more serious reason why she's leaving. Nicely done with the suspense factor. ☺

  37. She has a valid point to leave…

  38. Amrit Sinha says:

    Sometimes distance is inevitable, but it may also make the bond stronger.

  39. Prathima Rao says:

    The advantage of not having visited your blog all this while is that I dont have to wait for the next day for the next part of the story .. 🙂

  40. Always keeping us on the edge, aren't you? 🙂

  41. beingFab says:

    I feel sorry for Ayaan!! Poor guy doesn't seem to have any idea what's going on! Or does he?

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