Betrayed

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  1. Nibhz says:

    I wish I had a friend like that too!! But what is Kayra upto??

    Best Kept Secret

  2. SO curious about her decision. Can't even take a guess at this point.
    *Shantala @ ShanayaTales*

  3. Ls says:

    what is Kayra's decision?? cant wait.

  4. Interesting! I really want to know what happened next. This story sounds so real..

  5. Suzy says:

    Wonder what she's up to? Looking forward to this story unfold.

  6. Prasanna Rao says:

    The tale becomes more interesting. Wonder what Kayra's decision is! I haven't heard about this novel but I love anything that has to do with Paranormal 🙂

  7. bellybytes says:

    I love the way how this theme elicits such different responses from different people. Want to know what happens to your heroine.

  8. Aathira says:

    Don't leave us hanging like this, Swathi! I must say the story is getting more interesting by the chapter. What has Kayra done? Will be back tomorrow to know!

  9. Oh god! How long do I have to wait, Swathi. You are doing an awesome job in keeping the suspense. 🙂

  10. Rajlakshmi says:

    I loved the way you have expressed the anger and confusion … waiting for more.

  11. sulekkha says:

    Your story is progressing beautifully, am hooked.

  12. Shilpa Garg says:

    The story is shaping up well and looking forward to know what is bugging Kayra!

  13. Wow! Interesting 🙂 I'm doing a lot of guess work in my mind! Will come back to find out!!

  14. Soumya says:

    What is the decision? I want to know now!

    I love it that you are keeping each post short and crisp. Easy to read 🙂

  15. Ah a series….so I had to go back to A stranger in the mirror to understand what this part was about, and in the bargain got to read the series back to back…quite interesting Swati, and Im hoping Aayan's hunch is right, and Kayra does have a good reason for her behavior.

  16. Nice teasers to end every story. You certainly know how to keep the reader wanting more

  17. Arpita Dash says:

    Nail biting suspense! Wonderful Swathi…. 🙂 Can't wait for your next post… 😉

  18. He needs to do what I tell my kiddos at my daycare, Stop and Breathe 🙂 lol Just joking. Great story. http://stephaniesstuff84.blogspot.com/

  19. Keeping the suspense intact.

  20. Nimi Arora says:

    Hi Swathi,
    Impressed with your theme for the challenge. And also the challenging way you've chosen to write about it.

    Nimi
    http://FascinatingQuest.blogspot.com

  21. Melinda says:

    Congratulations on taking on the A-Z challenge! It's an impressive undertaking.

    http://oddmusings-melinda.blogspot.com/2015/04/forgiveness-thoughts-and-quotes.html

  22. Oh, what is she upto! You are leaving me hooked! 😛 Will be back tomorrow! Meanwhile, beautiful narration, Swathi 🙂 *Shalini @TaleofTwoTomatoes*

  23. I like the A-Z idea! I may have to try it someone. My favorite part of your post the great quote about friends on the "dog tag" thanks! (edit: Don't know this is posting as anon! I'm Ken Weliever from http://thepreachersword.com/

  24. Enjoyed reading 🙂 Thank you for sharing your story Swathi!

  25. Glad he didn't hurt anyone! Waiting to know what Kayra is up to. You're doing a great job, Swathi!

  26. You surely are a story teller. Read it and loved it…Will have to come tomorrow it seems hmn

  27. Sushree Dash says:

    Her decision has kept everyone hooked…..let's see what it actually is.

  28. a Rat says:

    Oh I'm curious.. I'll sure come back for more.. great read 🙂
    A Rat's Nibble

  29. Simran says:

    Well, you successfully managed to keep the suspense about Kayra's sudden change of mind. Heading towards the next part to find it out 😀

  30. Curiouser and curiouser – heading to read C now 🙂

  31. Debbie D. says:

    So curious about Kayra's decision and why it has upset Ayaan so much. Looking forward to the next chapter!

  32. Have a feeling that the decision is for the good of Ayaan reading from the last post.. but I know there's more to it.. let's hope this bond lasts for longer! Waiting to read more Swathi! Intriguing build up of the story!

  33. Vinay Leo R. says:

    I have heard of the book 🙂 are u using titles u have read and loved or random to match your series story?

    • swathishenoy says:

      First I had thought of using the titles I read and loved but it got difficult with my theme. So, I started taking some random titles and shaping my story according to that 😀

  34. Amrit Sinha says:

    I hope everything turns fine.

  35. Off to the next one 🙂

  36. Wondering what she is upto !!

  37. Prathima Rao says:

    I need a cup of coffee to go along with the story.. Finding it very intriguing. 🙂
    http://totallyinternalreflections.blogspot.sg/

  38. Very interesting and full of suspense. Great job!

  39. beingFab says:

    Great writing!! I almost felt like I was behind the wheel 🙂

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